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"Something Inside" By Prince Estaris

Hidden from the surface,
covered by a coat of doubt,
The feelings that one held so dear and could not go without.
A reason could not define, explain,
or relay a passive message,
Of why secrets were the answer to pain, fear and isolation.

Night, the dark,
it was then he could smile,
the sensations depressed and faded for one slumber.
Imbued in fantasy,
hopes and dreams,
No longer powerless to reality

Awake, he trembled,
Judged and torn by distant beings,
The day was change from what was safe
How could trusting ever seem right,
If they could reveal the hurt inside,
The burden one would rather hide.

Ticking clocks... Motionless hands, Numbers the dying dread

Time and space decimated a world he once knew,
Memories stolen, bonds shattered,
Swallowed by a newer date, never seen again.
Cruelty, deception, time's treasured friends,
A visit from his peers, ruining what was fixed
Making what was known alien to familiarity

Closed, a new face, another day, it was all fine
...to them anyway...
©2007-2010 ~Blu-Winters
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Author's Comments

"...I want to know. Is something bugging you? Is something on his mind? Will she be alright?..."

An open poem. I haven't written for a while but I hope you enjoy.

© 2007 Prince Estaris

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:iconinsanity-streak:
horray! i just said u should post more and you have! this is really good! i love the imagery you've conjured up in this it's a powerful piece and an emotive one too! the ending is especially good because its a turn on the rest of the poem!

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Neee such painful, sad words .__. .... ah love it XD;; Eeeeee ah can't wait to hear yousa play this!! >__< (juu better *chibi fist* )

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:iconblu-winters:
Wow thanks so much for the encouragement corrinne, you always were there to support my work all the way :] And i'm glad you can analyse my pieces on that technical level. Thank you for the feedback and i'll come up with more soon!

~Prince

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"Fight for the dream, Live for the moment"
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Weee, gomen for the gloominess but just expressing what needed to be and I'll definitely make sure yousas hear this before anyone else ^_^o

~Prince

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"Fight for the dream, Live for the moment"

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